The article “Rootless Rapper Finds His Rhythm,” is a great
example of constructive criticism. Jon Caramanica evaluates the transformation
that the rapper Pitbull has gone through time. The reason I say this is a great
constructive criticism is because Caramanica describes Pitbull by using example
of his music and other rappers. He explains very well why he thinks Pitbull has
finally found his area. “His sixth album, “Planet Pit,” completes his long
transformation from crunk-era curio to dance-rap star,” said Caramanica. He later states that his album is more of a
hip hop album until Pitbull raps on it. This statement is a great explanation
as to why Pitbull is now a dance-rap star. This example gets repeated in
different forms throughout the article, explaining why Pitbull has made a great
decision to change his style. Later in the article, to establish his point,
Caramanica compares Pitbull to the Black Eyed Peas. This enables the reader to
further understand why Pitbull has made a good change. He also incorporates
parts of his lyrics to the article to establish a point of how Pitbull was
raised in Miami with a Latin/American culture that is being reflected in his
songs. This also reflects the title of the article.